A long lost father

In Mr Sutherland literacy We were doing a story about a father and daughter. Firstly we had to read the story. Then we got a sheet and we had to do an ako sheet. In the ako sheet, we had to write what happens next, a Wanted poster And a title on the story. Comment and give me feedback on what I can do better.

Thankfulness

 

I am thankful for Football because it entertains me when I'm bored And I'm thankful for being good at it. I am also really thankful for my cat cause she gives me hugs and I like playing with her. I'm thankful for scooters cause I can get around fast and I can do tricks on it.

Bart and Orillve

In Mr Sutherland literacy we were doing a reading task about Bart and orillive. Bart is a boy with a cat called orillve. The cat gets hit by a car then Bart made him an orillvecopter I made my own orillvecopter check it out and comment and give me feedback, please.

Brawn vs Brain

In Mr Sutherland Literacy we were learning about persuasive writing. For our writing, we did it about brain vs brawn. I chose brawn over brain because you can earn a lot of money, And you can get a scholarship. Please coment on this and tell me if I need any feedback.

Similes and metaphor

In Sutherland reading, we where doing language features we had to do the meaning of the internet than in our own words give me some feedback and comment on what I can do better

In Mr Sutherland writing we have been learning about Persuasive writing first we had to make a copy our teacher has sent us. Then we had to fill in the hole thing and after we did that  we were allowed to make it all colourful and pretty. This is a work in progress. Please give us feedback and please give us feedback.

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