Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, February 26, 2019
Living Springs
The Monorail was really fun! I had to wait 10 minutes of more.
I was scared of the bugs. When I went to wash my hands there was a HUGE bug I jumped with fear and ran to the other sink and there was another HUGE bug I thought to myself and starred it in the eyes and went to a different sink
I didn't like the walk because it was HOT!😥 I thought my arms and legs would fall off and melt, But I pushed through the pain in my legs.
THE END!!
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Kia ora Blake!
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome overview/thing/sorry, anyway I really enjoyed reading this, I know exactly how you felt! Haha! You could possibly fix up the thing and how it goes
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- Isabella
Kia ora Blake. I was interested to read your blog about camp. I had heard that the walk on the first day was very hot. Good to read that you pushed through the pain in your legs. You could make this more useful to your readers by saying how you pushed through the pain. For example, when I am trying to push through pain when I exercise, I usually say positive comments in my head like "come on', you can do it!"
ReplyDeleteDo you do anything like that?