My Sick Cat

                                           My Sick Cat 

Meow!!! “What was that noise?” Liam whispered. “I don't know Blake whispered”. We slowly crept down the hallway and slowly opened the door and we saw my cat sitting there screeching and puking we thought how are we going to help her. “I think we should take her to the vet”. We crept to Blake’s parent's bedroom and we said we are taking Fleur to the vet on our RAZORS. Why did Mum explain? Fleur is sick! And we are really responsible children. So can we please borrow $190.00. We will be back in 1-hour bye! We put Fleur in her cage and I will carry Fleur on my razor! We put the garage door down and scooted to the vet. We sat down and waited until they took us in. We waited a few minutes then they said “Blake and Liam” We took her in a small room and said what was wrong with Fleur. The doctor said, “how long has this been happening”? Said the Doctor “Since we woke up”! We said, “What's wrong with her”? Said the Doctor “She has been puking and sneezing non-stop”. “Take this medicine and put it in her food 1 day”. Ok, thank you very much”. Liam and Blake went back home and feed Fleur her food and put one pill in it. She came over to her bowl and sniffed it then she gobbled it all up and then licked her lips. After that, we told her to go to bed and then she raced to her bed. The next day Fleur was all better.That night we heard a huge MEOW!!! “Oh no,” Liam said. 

In Mr Bell's reading group we had to make a narrative story. Liam and I came up with a story idea about my cat who was sick and changed it into a narrative story. This story is about my cat being sick and it is a real and a fake story, so some of it is made up and some is real. Please comment and give us feedback enjoy!