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Monday, September 2, 2019
The amazing pets in korimako
In Mr Sutherland literacy. We are doing persuasive writing. For our persuasive writing our topic was on making a change in the classroom. I chose to have pets at school. Cause I love pets. Also, they can keep you company all the time when you are sad. And they can cuddle you every day. Comment and give me feedback if you wish.
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