Friday, October 25, 2019
In Sutherland's literacy, we were making narratives. every day we had 10 minutes to plan and then 30 minutes to write the story, each day we had a different topic, I have two different stories and join them into one big story. This is a work in progress so comment and gives me feedback.
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Hi Blake its Cameron and I really liked how the kid went to jail because he murdered a man and got arrested even though he basically saved the town from dieing. Next time you could do the other dude faked the death so the kid could leave.:)
ReplyDeleteHi Blake,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you made the child go to prison even tho he basically saved everyone. Maybe next time you could maybe add a ... to create suspence.