We are involved in the Get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem This is just to say.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
This is just to say...
We are involved in the Get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem This is just to say.
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Blake,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you changed up the words a little bit but not to much so it still sounded the same, This reminded me of the time when my literacy did the same thing, maybe next time you could add a bit more writing and add a bit more about him or why you did one of his poems.I can't wait to see your next blog post. Have you done any other things naughty before?